Edenbound

I am really liking this FVN so far!

Early ŕating:

won't denied I become curious and hook on the story, it mysterious and quite  Aesthetic in the eye( and yes I'm wanna bite there belly :3). Music and the artstyle compliment each other. Overall 9.5/10 for me, reason for the .5 is that is still early on the story to really define the rating on it. Maybe when is complete that it change

Anyhow great story would recommend anyone for it. Keep up the good work 👏 

every time I finish this I always  want to know what happens next!

Well now. Sorry for focusing on only a small thing, but you’ve come up with a *really* cool language in this VN! Explaining why would be a spoiler, so I won’t go into details, but I think what you’ve done here is very nice. And if you’re revealing it the way I think you are … well, that’s downright clever. Good work!

Pity that, as the say, “the void will consume all”.

Otherwise, I think you’ve got something quite interesting going here, both in the setting and in the vibe. I have a few hunches about what might be going on – I had a sudden flash of inspiration on the balcony scene – but I don’t have enough information to be really sure yet. I look forward to playing future builds, and seeing if I’m thinking along the right lines!

I had a blast reading this! I love horror themes that don't overuse jumpscares and loud sounds, and gotta say, you absolutely nailed it! Those certain unsettling scenes definitely managed to give me goosebumps. 

The artwork, sound design and sprite effects, all those little details are perfect! I'll be on the lookout for future updates. Great work!

Just discovered this vn and goodness I reallllllyyyyy loved this. It scratches the sci fi cosmic horror itch I've been having and I've thoroughly enjoyed it a lot!!!!!! Looking forward to the next update

The latest update is everything I could have ever wanted and further cements my interest in this project. Can't say anything, it's best experienced blind. I can say that this is shaping up to be one of my favorite vns and we're only two builds deep~

excuse me YOU CANT JUST DROP THAT AMAZING BOMBSHELL OF A CLIFFHANGER

i was so immersed and everything! like goddamn it was amazing! 15/10

Even though what I read may not be the longest, it shows a lot of promise. The things done with ui and visuals? THe music? The prose of the narration? I am locked in and excited to see what the future holds for Edenbound

I must say that this is one of the most innovative vn I have seen, the theme feels very refreshing to look at, a science fiction story from which things have stopped having meaning, I have the feeling that very few histories take that of immorality as something bad, you can feel the loneliness in every damn text, something that I love a lot, also that (for now) the few moments of terror are very good, the erratic lines in the silhouettes give a very good feeling of chaos and danger , the characters feel very alive as they are not in the typical pose of looking straight ahead, the scenery despite being obscure they  have very good colors and the music is simply perfect for this setting, the story also stands out very well on its own, to Being only the prologue leaves a lot of intrigues, which I hope we'll see what is about, I loved this VN, I hope we'll see more soon :3

Thanks for giving me the usual spider nightmares. This game is quite good at expressing loneliness of characters, naturally making you want to comfort them. I really hope there will be numerous meaningful choices, because i've always felt like horror games are lacking those (usually just 1-2 to determine ending and that's it).

Overall, this is a very solid start for an FVN. The writing is pretty good, the characters are well distinguished from each other, the art is decent enough, and the music is honestly something I'd listen to on my own time! My main issue is that some sentences don't flow naturally. The best way to make them do that is to read what you write aloud and see if it flows in a natural way. As a writer myself, I do this all the time and it works wonders with my projects! 

In conclusion, I'm definitely reading the next update of this! I'll link my video on this as well: 

Looking pretty good so far! Hope more updates follow😋

Already played, I love the story, the art style, and the sound. I'm looking forward to playing more.  :3

The story has got me intrigued! looking forward to what comes next. Hats off to all the work you put into this first build, it's already looking pretty nice.

This looks interesting, i think i will give it a go.